It’s in the final of a national contest I entered too!!!

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    3 years ago

    Pretty nice beat, definitely has promise!

    The rapping sounds too much like a white teenager trying a bit too hard to sound cool / gangsta rapper like, but maybe that is ironic? Anyways… don’t take it personal if it isn’t :)

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      3 years ago

      thanks! welp, that’s probably due to me being a white teenager trying to sound cool XD. It’s not intentional, but hopefully i can work on it a bit more

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    3 years ago

    loved how the beat slightly alters throughout, the part between 1:15-1:45 is quite freakin cool

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    3 years ago

    I’m not exactly knowledgeable about rap music, but I enjoyed the song! The enunciation was good, the rhyme schemes varied, and a thematic through-line tied it all together! On another note, it’s neat that you have a Gemini capsule!

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      3 years ago

      Thanks so much! I appreciate that so much!!! i really need to post more on there :0