Catoblepas@lemmy.blahaj.zone to Poetry@lemmy.world · 1 month agoWhen people say, "we have made it through worse before" - Clint Smithlemmy.blahaj.zoneimagemessage-square20fedilinkarrow-up1312arrow-down111
arrow-up1301arrow-down1imageWhen people say, "we have made it through worse before" - Clint Smithlemmy.blahaj.zoneCatoblepas@lemmy.blahaj.zone to Poetry@lemmy.world · 1 month agomessage-square20fedilink
minus-squarerowrowrowyourboat@sh.itjust.workslinkfedilinkarrow-up20arrow-down4·1 month agoSerious question: How is this poetry? Isn’t this just prose formatted in a weird way?
minus-squareYingwu@lemmy.dbzer0.comlinkfedilinkarrow-up23arrow-down2·1 month agoProse can be poetry too. I don’t get why people should always want to criticize poetry, or art, for not being “proper”. Poetry is there to reach inside the heart and to make you feel something. Nothing less, nothing more.
minus-squareValmond@lemmy.worldlinkfedilinkarrow-up1arrow-down8·1 month agoIt sure makes me feel something. I doubt the author wanted me to feel that way lol.
minus-squareCatoblepas@lemmy.blahaj.zoneOPlinkfedilinkarrow-up10·1 month ago Isn’t this just prose formatted in a weird way? When you get down to it, isn’t that all poetry really is? But really, I think this would technically fall under ‘free verse’ (poetry with no rules).
minus-squareCarbonatedPastaSauce@lemmy.worldlinkfedilinkarrow-up8arrow-down2·1 month agoHow is it not poetry? Did you feel anything when you read it?
minus-squareValmond@lemmy.worldlinkfedilinkarrow-up2arrow-down15·1 month agoThat formatting is the worst, cudos to the enormous blanks too, wtf.
minus-squareYingwu@lemmy.dbzer0.comlinkfedilinkarrow-up6arrow-down1·1 month agoPoetry is both the sound and the silence. Without the silence and the breaks, there can’t be any poetry.
minus-squareValmond@lemmy.worldlinkfedilinkarrow-up3arrow-down13·edit-21 month agoSure, but this is not poetry spaces, it’s just badly cut up text IMO. You think it is done intentionally? Like some post modernist style?
minus-squareddh@lemmy.sdf.orglinkfedilinkarrow-up5·edit-21 month agoSome phrases remained intact, while some were abruptly cut off.
minus-squareValmond@lemmy.worldlinkfedilinkarrow-up1arrow-down6·1 month agoThank you captain obvious.
minus-squareddh@lemmy.sdf.orglinkfedilinkarrow-up3·1 month agoSo the sentence structure reflects the lives of the poem’s subjects, some endure but others are cut short. Is it that obvious?
minus-squareValmond@lemmy.worldlinkfedilinkarrow-up1arrow-down3·edit-21 month agoYeah, it’s very edgy. What a masterpiece. /s Live Laugh Love Level.
Serious question: How is this poetry? Isn’t this just prose formatted in a weird way?
Prose can be poetry too. I don’t get why people should always want to criticize poetry, or art, for not being “proper”. Poetry is there to reach inside the heart and to make you feel something. Nothing less, nothing more.
It sure makes me feel something. I doubt the author wanted me to feel that way lol.
When you get down to it, isn’t that all poetry really is? But really, I think this would technically fall under ‘free verse’ (poetry with no rules).
Baby shoes
For sale
Never worn
How is it not poetry?
Did you feel anything when you read it?
That formatting is the worst, cudos to the enormous blanks too, wtf.
Poetry is both the sound and the silence. Without the silence and the breaks, there can’t be any poetry.
Sure, but this is not poetry spaces, it’s just badly cut up text IMO.
You think it is done intentionally? Like some post modernist style?
Some phrases remained intact, while some were abruptly cut off.
Thank you captain obvious.
So the sentence structure reflects the lives of the poem’s subjects, some endure but others are cut short. Is it that obvious?
Yeah, it’s very edgy. What a masterpiece. /s
Live Laugh Love Level.