Catoblepas@lemmy.blahaj.zone to Poetry@lemmy.world · 6 days agoWhen people say, "we have made it through worse before" - Clint Smithlemmy.blahaj.zoneimagemessage-square21fedilinkarrow-up1311arrow-down111
arrow-up1300arrow-down1imageWhen people say, "we have made it through worse before" - Clint Smithlemmy.blahaj.zoneCatoblepas@lemmy.blahaj.zone to Poetry@lemmy.world · 6 days agomessage-square21fedilink
minus-squareValmond@lemmy.worldlinkfedilinkarrow-up2arrow-down15·6 days agoThat formatting is the worst, cudos to the enormous blanks too, wtf.
minus-squareYingwu@lemmy.dbzer0.comlinkfedilinkarrow-up6arrow-down1·6 days agoPoetry is both the sound and the silence. Without the silence and the breaks, there can’t be any poetry.
minus-squareValmond@lemmy.worldlinkfedilinkarrow-up3arrow-down13·edit-26 days agoSure, but this is not poetry spaces, it’s just badly cut up text IMO. You think it is done intentionally? Like some post modernist style?
minus-squareddh@lemmy.sdf.orglinkfedilinkarrow-up5·edit-26 days agoSome phrases remained intact, while some were abruptly cut off.
minus-squareddh@lemmy.sdf.orglinkfedilinkarrow-up3·6 days agoSo the sentence structure reflects the lives of the poem’s subjects, some endure but others are cut short. Is it that obvious?
minus-squareValmond@lemmy.worldlinkfedilinkarrow-up1arrow-down3·edit-25 days agoYeah, it’s very edgy. What a masterpiece. /s Live Laugh Love Level.
That formatting is the worst, cudos to the enormous blanks too, wtf.
Poetry is both the sound and the silence. Without the silence and the breaks, there can’t be any poetry.
Sure, but this is not poetry spaces, it’s just badly cut up text IMO.
You think it is done intentionally? Like some post modernist style?
Some phrases remained intact, while some were abruptly cut off.
Thank you captain obvious.
So the sentence structure reflects the lives of the poem’s subjects, some endure but others are cut short. Is it that obvious?
Yeah, it’s very edgy. What a masterpiece. /s
Live Laugh Love Level.