I like the clear separation of fields the image allows, with the water, wet stones, dry stones, orange vulcanic sand and finally the green fields. The center piece of the image is made up by my wife in a cyan colored shirt sitting on a white towel. However to get the shot of the color lines right I had to go up quite a bit, which makes her so tiny in the image that she does not really have any influence on the watcher anymore…

  • atzanteol@sh.itjust.worksEnglish
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    2 months ago

    I like this a lot. Though I do think the “human” elements do detract from the desired effect a bit. Without them it’s more “abstract” and just leaves the lines, colors and textures which are fantastic.

    Beautiful shot!

    • Nooodel@lemmy.worldOP
      4·
      2 months ago

      I took your comment and Obi’s, and combined them in the edited version below Obi’s comment.

      Thanks so much for the constructive feedback and the praise!

      • atzanteol@sh.itjust.worksEnglish
        1·
        2 months ago

        Sure thing - it’s an excellent composition regardless of my nitpicking. I’ve struggled a bit with drone photography and this has given me ideas!

    • Nooodel@lemmy.worldOP
      2·
      2 months ago

      I took your comment and Obi’s, and combined them in the editing d version below Obi’s comment.

      Thanks so much for the constructive feedback and the praise!

    • Nooodel@lemmy.worldOP
      1·
      2 months ago

      I took your comment and Obi’s, and combined them in the editing d version below Obi’s comment.

      Thanks so much for the constructive feedback and the praise!