Do you think in this example the elipsis should’ve been a comma instead, or it works just fine the way it is?
I couldn’t help but read it as she lost track of what she was talking about mid sentence, then finally after the fog lifted, remembered the rest of what she was saying.
Do you think in this example the elipsis should’ve been a comma instead, or it works just fine the way it is?
I couldn’t help but read it as she lost track of what she was talking about mid sentence, then finally after the fog lifted, remembered the rest of what she was saying.