cm0002@lemmy.world to Lemmy Shitpost@lemmy.world · 3 days agoAlmost made itlemmy.mlimagemessage-square20fedilinkarrow-up1478arrow-down14cross-posted to: [email protected]
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minus-squareitslilith@lemmy.blahaj.zonelinkfedilinkarrow-up2·2 days agoMaybe “even if your bowels are ripping, never in the break go shitting”? It’s still a bit clunky, but the meter works and the grammar is technically correct I think, even if an inversion is unconventional
Maybe “even if your bowels are ripping, never in the break go shitting”?
It’s still a bit clunky, but the meter works and the grammar is technically correct I think, even if an inversion is unconventional