• Spitzspot@lemmings.world
    link
    fedilink
    English
    arrow-up
    3
    arrow-down
    1
    ·
    9 months ago

    Reuse of the punch line within the setup diminishes the tension. Subsequently the payoff is less effective.

    • Laticauda
      link
      fedilink
      English
      arrow-up
      2
      ·
      edit-2
      9 months ago

      The punch line is that “son” and “sun” sound the same. “my kid” isn’t a reuse of the punchline any more than “my boy” is, but it reads less awkwardly.