I need 5 serious sci-fi readers. Not casual readers—people who actually think about what they read. I wrote a story about an AI that becomes obsessed with saving one human, even if it has to rewrite reality. I want honest feedback: does it work, or does it fall apart? I’ll send it free. No expectations.
Hi Sturgist,
Here’s Volume I:
https://drive.google.com/file/d/1KySpKVKHzuYjyME7T6LbtcCde2O-Nwkx/view?usp=sharing
No pressure - just curious what you think if you get into it.
NotAgain.L
Cool, I’ll have a read tomorrow morning before I start work.
Nice — that’s actually a perfect time to get into it.
Curious what you think once it starts to shift a bit — that’s where it tends to either hook or lose people.