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minus-squareSergio@slrpnk.netlinkfedilinkEnglisharrow-up11arrow-down8·24 hours agoKiller comic. Last panel’s a little weak though. Maybe it should break the fourth wall, like the guy looks at the reader and is like: “This is causing all the world’s problems.”
minus-squareEphera@lemmy.mllinkfedilinkEnglisharrow-up8arrow-down3·22 hours agoThere’s a trope that many comics can be improved, if you remove the last panel. I do believe this to be one such case…
minus-squareIlovethebomb@lemm.eelinkfedilinkarrow-up2arrow-down1·17 hours agoI think removing the text bubble and just having the character’s shocked impression would be a good choice.
Killer comic. Last panel’s a little weak though. Maybe it should break the fourth wall, like the guy looks at the reader and is like: “This is causing all the world’s problems.”
Something like this?
Nice!
There’s a trope that many comics can be improved, if you remove the last panel. I do believe this to be one such case…
I think removing the text bubble and just having the character’s shocked impression would be a good choice.