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For Whom The Bell Tolls by Metallica
Take a look to the sky just before you die It’s the last time you will Blackened roar, massive roar fills the crumbling sky Shattered goal fills his soul with a ruthless cry Stranger now are his eyes to this mystery Hears the silence so loud Crack of dawn, all is gone except the will to be Now they see what will be, blinded eyes to see
The Unforgiven III, by Metallica?
How can I be lost If I’ve got nowhere to go? Search for seas of gold How come it’s got so cold? How can I be lost When I guessed the wrong song? And how can I blame you When it’s me I can’t forgive?
Your added lyrics don’t fit the measure. It doesn’t flow like the original.