• orbituary@lemmy.dbzer0.com
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    1 day ago

    Looks good. You have liner on one eye and not on the other, which is the only thing that I really saw.

    Your proportions, expression, colors, composition, etc., are great.****

  • Kit@lemmy.blahaj.zone
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    1 day ago

    I love the art style and facial expression. It feels like a very relatable moment - like when you hear something wild in public and can’t help but turn to look.

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      15 hours ago

      You are right, The reference photo didn’t have too much detail on her face, it was a wide angle shot from distance and she was having a look back while walking on the street.

  • DaveyRocket@lemmy.world
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    1 day ago

    It has a lot going for it.

    If there was more contrast on the face (so it’s less flat) and thicker eyelids (less white of the eyes as well or maybe they’re too uniformly white), I’d wager the face would “pop out” more.

    It’s coming along nicely!

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      15 hours ago

      That’s a valid point, I made it overly saturated and lost some contrast towards the end. Thank you!